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Nice job with this! The layout is great and consistent with the ItO style. Because you mentioned you wanted feedback/critique, I will say that this adventure feels a little low on gameplay and interaction. 

The rooms encounters are a little obvious and passive in some places (e.g., the lobby and landing don't really act on the PCs). Also, the pantry says there is a 50% chance of a "simple trap" but the description doesn't say what the trap is, how it works, or why it's interesting. I think it would be better if the trap were specific and were guaranteed to be there for more interaction. Finally, the dungeon is pretty linear, with one room after another in order (with a locked room off to the side). This doesn't leave much room for player exploration. 

Thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate it!

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This is a great adventure, but also in Italian the names "Dithers", "Manifred" and "Harmon" sounded like a silly joke about upper limbs (dita=fingers, mani=hands and arm being arm of course). So that was an unexpected plus.

Thank you for the kind words and I'm so glad you liked the adventure!

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Brilliant !

I'm glad you like it! Thanks for leaving a comment!

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The layout of this adventure is superb! Having the map on each page is such a godsend. Also, really liked having the dedicated rooms for the random encounters.

Thank you! I'm glad you like it! I got the inspiration for the dedicated rooms from a Mork Borg adventure "Rotblack Sludge" its maybe my favorite adventure to introduce people to the system!

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Fun & spooky, for my players and me (as newbie "Into the Odd" referee)

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I need to get into gear and finish the sequel!

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this is bloody awesome. Great job! 

Thank you! I'm glad you like it!

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Love the looks of it. Great ” Into the Odd” feeling. More to come! Can’t wait! *gatheringdiceandpeopletoplaywith

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Thanks! The art was a lot of fun to make!